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英语作文万能开头 英语作文这样写更有说服力
1、关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
there are different opinions among people as to ____ 。some people suggest that____。
2、俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。
there is an old saying______。 its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.
3、现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……;其次，……更为糟糕的是……
today， ____， which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. first， ____ second，____。 what makes things worse is that______。
4、现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……
nowadays，it is common to ______。 many people like ______because ______。 besides，______。
5、任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
everything has two sides and ______is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6、关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)……，在他们看来，……
people’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.some people say that ______。to them，_____。
7、人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。
man is now facing a big problem ______which is becoming more and more serious.
2012年考博英语作文写作：开头万能公式
1．开头万能公式一：名人名言
有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编！
原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？
经典句型：a proberb says, “ you are only young once.”（适用于已记住的名言）
it goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （适用于自编名言）
更多经典句型：as everyone knows, no one can deny that…
2．开头万能公式二：数字统计
原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：
according to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college
students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：
honesty根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
travel by bike根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
youth根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
five-day work week better than six-day work?根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型：a recent statistics shows that …
英语作文写作指导：中考英语作文万能句子
下面是语文迷网小编为大家整理的中考英语
作文
万能句型，欢迎大家阅读参考。一、开头句型选择
1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
there are different opinions among people as to ____ 。some people suggest that____。
2. 俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。
there is an old saying______。 its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.
3.现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……;其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。
today， ____， which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. first， ____ second，____。 what makes things worse is that______。
4.现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……。
nowadays，it is common to ______。 many people like ______because ______。 besides，______。
5.任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
everything has two sides and ______is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6.关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)……，在他们看来，……
people’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.some people say that ______。to them，_____。
7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。
man is now facing a big problem ______which is becoming more and more serious.
8.……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢?
according to thefigure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______while. obviously，______，but why?
11、recently， the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.
最近，…问题已引起人们的关注。
12、internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. it has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些严重的问题。
13、nowadays，(overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.
如今，(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了。
14、with the development of science and technology， more and more people believe that…
随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为…
二、结尾句型
1、taking all these factors into consideration， we naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论…
2、taking into account all these factors， we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…
考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会得出合理的结论…
3、hence/therefore， we’d better come to the conclusion that…
因此，我们最好得出这样的结论…
4、there is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点。
5、all in all， we cannot live without… but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
总之，我们没有…是无法生活的。但同时，我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。
6、it is high time that we put an end to the (trend)。
该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
7、it is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …
该是采纳…的建议，并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。
8、不用说…… it goes without saying that = it is obvious that …
例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。it goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.
9、……是必要的 it is necessary (for sb.) to do / that … ……
是重要的 it is important(for sb.) to do / that … ……
是适当的 it is proper (for sb.) to do / that … ……
是紧急的 it is urgent (for sb.) to do / that …
例：it is proper for us to keep the public places clean.
it is proper that we (should)keep the public places clean. 我们应当保持公共场所清洁。
2012年考博英语作文：开头万能公式
1．开头万能公式一：名人名言
有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编！
原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？
经典句型：a proberb says, “ you are only young once.”（适用于已记住的名言）
it goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （适用于自编名言）
更多经典句型：as everyone knows, no one can deny that…
2．开头万能公式二：数字统计
原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：
according to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college
students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：
honesty根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
travel by bike根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
youth根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
five-day work week better than six-day work?根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型：a recent statistics shows that …
2013考博英语作文开头形式
1．开门见山，揭示主题
文章一开头，，就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。
如“how i spent my vacation”（我怎样度假）的开头是： i spent my last vacation happily．
下面是题为“honesty”（谈诚实）一文中的开头：
honesty is one of the best virtues．an honest man is always trusted and respected．on the contrary， one who tells lies is regarded as a “liar”，and is looked upon by honest people．
2．交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头
在文章的开头，先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。如“a trip to jinshan” （去金山旅游）的开头：
the day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to jinshan. the bus ride there took three hours. the long trip made us very tired， but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3. 回忆性的开头
用回忆的方法来开头。例如“a trip to the taishan mountain”（泰山游）的开头是：
i remember my first trip to the taishan mountain as if it were yesterday.
4．概括性的开头
即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“the happiness of reading books”（读书的快乐）的开头：
people often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. but i say that to read books is more valuable than anything else， because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5．介绍环境式的开头
即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“an accident”（一场事故）的开头是：
it was a rainy and windy morning. the sky was gloomy， the temperature was low， and the street was nearly empty. i was on my way back to school. suddenly， a speeding car came round the corner.
6．交待写作目的的开头。
在文章的一开头就交待写作目的，如通过文章要表扬谁，批评谁，或说明一个什么问题等。如 “pollution control” （控制污染）的开头：
in this article i shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.
中考英语作文之开头与结尾的万能公式
1. 开头万能公式一： 名人 名言
有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”，很好办：编!
原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
经典句型：
a proverb says, “ you are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
it goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)
更多经典句型：
as everyone knows, no one can deny that…
2. 开头万能公式二：数字统计
原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在
考试
的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：according to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：
honesty：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
travel by bike：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
youth：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
five-day work week better than six-day work?：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型：
a recent statistics shows that …
1. 结尾万能公式一：如此结论
说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子：
obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语：
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型：
thus, it can be concluded that…, therefore, we can find that…
2. 结尾万能公式二：如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢?
更多句型：
accordingly, i recommend that some measures be taken.
consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
[中考英语 作文
2013考博英语作文最常见的开头形式
1．开门见山，揭示主题
文章一开头，，就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。
如“how i spent my vacation”（我怎样度假）的开头是： i spent my last vacation happily．
下面是题为“honesty”（谈诚实）一文中的开头：
honesty is one of the best virtues．an honest man is always trusted and respected．on the contrary， one who tells lies is regarded as a “liar”，and is looked upon by honest people．
2．交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头
在文章的开头，先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。如“a trip to jinshan” （去金山旅游）的开头：
the day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to jinshan. the bus ride there took three hours. the long trip made us very tired， but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3. 回忆性的开头
用回忆的方法来开头。例如“a trip to the taishan mountain”（泰山游）的开头是：
i remember my first trip to the taishan mountain as if it were yesterday.
4．概括性的开头
即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“the happiness of reading books”（读书的快乐）的开头：
people often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. but i say that to read books is more valuable than anything else， because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5．介绍环境式的开头
即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“an accident”（一场事故）的开头是：
it was a rainy and windy morning. the sky was gloomy， the temperature was low， and the street was nearly empty. i was on my way back to school. suddenly， a speeding car came round the corner.
6．交待写作目的的开头。
在文章的一开头就交待写作目的，如通过文章要表扬谁，批评谁，或说明一个什么问题等。如 “pollution control” （控制污染）的开头：
in this article i shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.
中考英语作文写作指导：看图作文
最近几年的中考英语当中，很多省市已经摆脱了单一作文模式，采用一大一小两个作文相结合的模式。例如，去年辽宁沈阳中考英语作文就是一个小作文，应用文-写假条，加上一个大作文，汉语提示作文构成。今年，北京中考英语作文也将是两个，一个看图作文在加上一个提示作文构成。这一讲，我们先来学习一下看图作文的写法。
看图作文要求考生按照所给图画，通过合理的联想将一组画面的内容正确地表达出来。看图作文与其他类型作文的不同之处在于，它除了要求考生有英语语言表达能力，还要求考生有观察能力、分析能力和想象能力。
写好看图作文应注意的事项1、结合文字提示，正确理解图意。一般情况下，看图作文在提供图画的同时也附带有简要的文字提示，我们可以利用文字提示去正确地理解图意，得到要点。切忌孤立地看图而忽视文字提示。
写作从图画的细节出发。所谓细节，就是指图画中的人物、事件、地点、环境、时间、动作等。依据图画细节，就可以把图画的内容用英语具体而生动地表达出来了。
（三）例题分析（例题）
同学们，看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后，你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形？请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。
要求：
⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述，不可多选或少选。
⒉ 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；
⒊ 词数 80 ～ 100。
参考词汇： 建议 suggest v. suggestion n.
气体 gas n. 污染 pollution n.
the pollutions
① one third of the world's people don't have enough clean water.
② more and more diseases are caused by polluted air.
③ people are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.
④ every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.
这道看图作文题，主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从考查的形式上来说，虽是看图，实质上却属于提示性的作文。这个作文应该结合个人的观点，选择的余地还是很大的。做这个题应该注意几个方面：
1、认真读题。注意，题目虽然给了四幅图，但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。
2、题意要求的是阐述个人的观点-最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述。
3、结合所给的提示。提示中，对每种污染都进行了阐述，考生可以这些描述进行写作。
4、注意字数，语法，拼写等，避免错误。
下面是两个例文，大家可以参考一下。
one possible version:
the environment is becoming worse and worse. there are many kinds of pollution i worry about. the most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people can't live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. more and more diseases are caused by polluted air.
i think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. we'd better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. we should make our world more and more beautiful.
another possible version:
the first fact i worry about is noise pollution. people can't sleep well if there is too much noise. that's why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. i suggest all the factories and cars shouldn't make terrible noises. if they make terrible noise that isn't allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which can't make terrible noise.
the other pollution is rubbish pollution. if everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. some people throw the waste paper about. i suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.
下面，我们来看看这道题的评分标准。一般来说，各地的评分标准都和下面的这个标准差不多。这个最高的标准，实际上也就是我们写作的目标。
评分标准：
1. 内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分；
2. 内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分；
3. 内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分；
4. 只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-2分。
看图作文不可小视。希望大家掌握答好这种题型的要点，并积累词汇。
中考英语作文写作指导记叙文
记叙文是记人叙事的文章，它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个" w "（ what, who, when, where, why ）和一个" h "（ how ）。记叙文的重点在于"述说"和"描写"，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚，描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。
一、记叙文的特点
1. 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过"我"来传达给读者，使人读后感到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
the other day, i was driving along the street. suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. i was so frightened that i quickly turned to the left side. but it was too late. the car hit my bike and i fell off it.
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受"我"活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
little tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. on the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. what could he do? then he had a good idea.
2. 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3. 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4. 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
in my summer holidays, i did a lot of things. apart form doing my homework, reading an english novel, watching tv and doing some housework, i went on a trip to qingdao. it is really a beautiful city. there are many places of interest to see. but what impressed me most was the sunrise.
the next morning i got up early. i was very happy because it was a fine day. by the time i got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. in a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. the sun was very red, not shining. it rose slowly. at last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. at the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.
what a moving and unforgettable scene!
5. 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
i was in the kitchen, and i was cooking something. suddenly i heard a loud noise from the front. i thought maybe someone was knocking the door. i asked who it was but i heard no reply. after a while i saw my cat running across the parlor. i realized it was the cat. i felt released.
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把"悬念"给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
i was in the kitchen cooking something. "crash!" a loud noise came from the front. thinking someone was knocking at the door, i asked, "who?" no reply. after a while, i saw my cat running across the parlor. "it's you." i said, quite released.
二、写好记叙文的基本要领
1. 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个" w "和一个" h "有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些" w "和" h "，但动笔之前，围绕五个" w "和" h "进行构思是必不可少的。
2. 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
one night a man came to our house and told me, "there is a family with eight children. they have not eaten for days." i took some food with me and went.
when i finally came to that family, i saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger. there was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.
i gave the rice to the mother. she spanided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. when she came back, i asked her, "where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "to my neighbors - they are hungry also!"
3. 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
one day xiaoqiang was wandering away. he was soon lost among people and traffic. he could not find the way back home and started crying. just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. they went up to xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. the two students decided to take him home. mother was pleased to see xiaoqiang come back safe and sound. she invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it. she served them with tea but they left.
修改后：
the other day, five-year-old xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. after some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. but he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. when he could not find the way home, he started and crying. just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. they immediately went up to him.
"little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.
"i want mom, i go home." said the boy, still crying.
"don't worry, we'll send you home."
and they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house. with the help of a policeman, they finally found it.
when the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.
2015年中考英语作文写作指导
阅读电视广告词：“if we don’t save water，the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。
提示：
1.生活离不开水。
2.可饮用水在减少。
3.水污染严重。
4.应保护水源，再利用水。
思路点拨与参考答案
a. [思路点拨]：
①文体：记叙文。
②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。
③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。
jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest.every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. but a few years ago，some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.they threw their rubbish，such as plastic bags，fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.sometimes they broke trees，picked flowers and killed birds. some even made fires in the woods to cook food.how dangerous it was.luckily，great changes have taken place here.tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins，and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.they bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.all these changes make us very happy.
b. [思路点拨]：
①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。
②时态：一般现在时态。
③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。
water is very important to humans.we can’t live without water.the water we can drink is falling.but some people don’t seem to care about it.they waste a lot of water.they pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.water pollution is getting more and more serious.so we must do something to stop the pollution.we not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.if we don’t do this，the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.
